The new WordPress version of my site allows me to create menus and pages that are separate from the blog – so I have created a menu header for My Current Projects and I’m putting some information about Hell has its Demons in that place. So far there is a synopsis and a character history of Jake, one of the novel’s main characters. I’ll be adding some background and character information as I progress with the planning and writing of the novel.
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Jake: Hell has its Demons Character Profile
I worked on the life story of one of my major characters from Hell has its Demons yesterday. The following paragraphs tell the story of Jake before the events of the novel take place:
Jake’s family moved to St Brett’s when he was 11, a year after the Plague first struck in 1348. His young sister died, but otherwise his family was relatively unharmed. The village where they lived all but disappeared though. His father sold the small plot of land they held and left the village before their lord could demand the fine payable for villains leaving his manor. They arrived in St Brett’s and found that they were able to get a burgess plot on the cheap – the abbey desperate for money with half the town’s tenants having died.
As a child Jake was entranced by stories of knights and seeing them go past in their armour, with their fancy ladies – visiting the abbey for instance or coming into town for the fairs that happened three times a year. He was taken in by the romance of these stories and the pageantry of the knights he saw. He would later bitterly resent the wealth of these nobles and his own foolish hope that he might become a knight too.
His father earns a living through a variety of enterprises, becoming most successful at brewing and running a tavern. John is a shrewd businessman and also sees opportunities for speculating on the trade of cloth manufactured in the town. He encourages others to invest capital into ventures, thereby avoiding risk, but takes a good share of the profits. He uses his son, Jake, to ensure the shipments reach their destination safely – Jake is physically intimidating and also John trusts him. Jake is party to occasional deception of John’s business clients. Jake travels to London and ports in East Anglia on business.
From the age of 16 to 17 John is able to send his boy Jake to the grammar school briefly. Jake learns quickly but can’t stand the discipline of study and the hypocrisy of the monks. He is expelled for a prank on the teacher – who will later be an obedientary or abbot?
The Abbey observes the success of the cloth exports from St Brett’s and the lack of income it derives and seeks to impose levies on St Brett’s merchants – whereas previously it could tax merchants coming to fairs at St Brett’s to buy produce.
These taxes affect John and his associates – a group of wealthier burgesses who control the cloth trade and regularly drink in his tavern. In 1361 when the abbey imposes these tolls the burgesses rebel and the abbey’s tax-collector is murdered.
His Mother died during second coming of the Black Death in 1362.
In 1363 when the abbey bring in local gentry to support their collection of the tolls there is street-warfare. The abbey is briefly besieged. The Abbot promises to withdraw the new tolls, but asks instead for increased tolls for use of the Abbey mills. John is happy with that – he has organized house fulling mills in the workshops of his suppliers.
Jake is supportive of all this activity and helps his father – they are always seen together and effectively control what happens in the town.
Jake is a keen sportsman, football, archery and poaching in the Abbey’s forest.
Jake has some of his own money now and plans to set-up on his own. He buys his own tavern.
Jake marries in 1365 a girl called Edith. She died in childbirth as did the child. Jake has given up on being a father now. Is it worth bringing a child into such a world?
Jake’s tavern is struggling to make a profit. He has become more distant from his father. He no longer represents him on business trips – he doesn’t have time – he is running his own business now, but also morning his dead wife and child.
The conflict with the abbey has died down. The abbey still demands its rights and seems to exert more control – but only over the lesser people of the town – John and his cronies have come to an arrangement. In 1367 they form a new fraternity and pay for an endowment to the abbey. Jake has offended his father by going off on his own and rejecting his advice – his father is quietly cutting him out of his dealings and making him suffer for going against him.
Jake finds Margery and her mother camped out on his doorstep one cold morning early in 1369. He is ready to turn away the two beggars who have appeared from nowhere, but something stops him. He lets them in and cooks them some hot food. His housekeeper, who has taken a shine to him which he hasn’t realized, immediately takes a dislike to them – witch she calls the old woman, who mutters superstitiously under her breath. Jake allows them to board at his house. The old woman does not last the winter. Jake and Margery become lovers, the housekeeper is sacked and Margery lives with Jake (in sin). She has a hold over him.
His father is jealous of Jake’s romantic success and plots against him, first having others accuse him in the abbey’s canon court of fornication. Jake promises to marry. John tries something else, pointing out Jake’s poverty to Margery.
Jake leaves St Brett’s in 1369 (when he was 31) after his father marries Margery (when she was 27). Jake tried to kill his father and Margery shortly before he left in an angry confrontation.
Jake joins a retinue being assembled to support the Black Prince’s forces in Aquitaine. From 1370 to 1374 involved in chevauchées, sieges and skirmishes in various parts of Western France. Involved in war crimes – but this is part and parcel of being a soldier? Jake has become cynical – life has dealt him a cruel hand so he feels it is alright for him to take it out on others. He has realised that only get what you can take in this world.
In 1374 effectively becomes an outlaw in France with a gang of other unpaid soldiers. They capture Roger and some other clerks on their return from Avignon. They plan to ransom the priests for money. But for Roger their plan fails, the other priests are worth something, but not Roger. The other soldiers plan to kill Roger and take his stuff. Jake protects him and saves him. They part. Jake returns to England, but ends up in gaol. Roger hears that he is in gaol and helps secure his release if he will become his servant. Roger is on his way to Oxford to take up a post as Master of Astronomy at the University.
New Title for Habit for Killing: Hell has its Demons
My medieval fantasy mystery now has a new title and one that I am really quite happy with. From now on I will use this new title to label all posts which provide updates on it’s progress.
Investigating an infestation of demons in the town of
In St Brett’s Roger sees demons possessing the townspeople. Jake thinks they are just acting very strangely. The people are scared and want answers fast. A beautiful woman, Margery Haukwake, is accused of witchcraft. Roger feels sure that she isn’t guilty. Jake knows she isn’t. He was once engaged to marry her, until his widowed father stole her from him.
Margery is helping Roger with his enquiries, but she is scared. The life of her husband, Jake’s father, has been threatened by the necromancer who has summoned the demons. She knows this man’s identity but not his purpose.
Margery is convinced to testify to the Royal Justice who has recently arrived to investigate the strange events in the town. But the necromancer, a monk called Edmund Hope, has got to the Justice first, and presents evidence accusing Margery of witchcraft. Margery is swiftly put on trial, but Roger’s eloquent pleading of Margery’s case persuades the Royal Justice to free Margery and instead arrest Edmund.
When they try to arrest Edmund, the monk turns his demon-possessed minions on the Justice and kills him and his soldiers. The town, and even the Abbot, is under the control of Edmund and his demons. Roger and Jake flee the town, but Margery is captured during their escape.
Roger and Jake make their way to
Roger and Jake realise that Edmund must be the necromancer who aids John of Gaunt.
Jake returns in secret to St Brett’s to see if Margery can be freed, while Roger stays in London to help the mother of the heir to the throne. Jake helps free Margery and those townspeople who are still free of possession. They seek refuge in a nearby castle.
Roger saves Richard from his illness with the help of a demon, Bifrons, who was previously allied to Edmund. Bifrons feels unloved by Edmund now that the necromancer has other demons to do his bidding.
After evading demonic and mortal threats Roger, Joan and Richard, together with Bifrons in mortal guise, escape from
Edmund has a final plan to aid his patron John of Gaunt. Instead of killing Richard, they will replace his soul with that of a demon bound to their service, and so control the kingdom. Edmund first tests this on Margery and, when this works, also takes the soul of Richard. With the help of Bifrons, Roger journeys into hell to save the lost souls, while Jake fights off Gaunt’s army with a rag-tag group of townspeople. Roger with the help of Bifrons destroys Edmund and frees the souls of Margery and Richard. On their return Gaunt realises that his plot has failed and asks his nephew Richard for forgiveness, claiming that he only sought to protect him.
More Changes to the Middle
I have had a rethink about the middle section of the synopsis:
Roger framed for the murder, but freed [once the Inquisitor is blackmailed to protect the Abbey]
The woman Roger loves, Margery, is arrested on suspicion of witchcraft.
The Inquisitor reads the evidence presented to him by Roger but rejects it out of hand and threatens Roger that if he doesn’t stop he will be arrested or worse as well. [What he’s trying to say is that Edmund will get him.]
There are more murders and this time they affect the richer townspeople. [Why? Because Edmund is angry at the arrogance of the townspeople and their accusations against the Abbey – he thinks the burgesses are scum.] A riot against the abbey ensues and Margery is released.
When Roger sides with the town the Abbot threatens him with excommunication and banishment. He carries out this threat. Roger becomes a priest of the people – an intellectual John Ball character.
John of Gaunt arrives to restore order. Margery fooled into thinking Gaunt will be merciful, but he turns on her. She escapes his amorous clutches using magic.
Gaunt threatens the town with terrible consequences unless Margery is returned.
The townspeople stand firm – there is violence, Gaunt’s men are expelled. The town enjoys ruling itself for a brief day.
After the riot and the failure of Gaunt’s troops to restore order, Edmund takes advantage and terrorises the town at night with his demon and acolyte monks, many dressed as devils and foul creatures of the night. They take the daughter of Jake and others and go to the woods to sacrifice them. His aim is to summon more power – he is power mad/hungry now. He wants to take power over Gaunt and the Abbot completely.
Perhaps this leads to the prayer to the Saint for help – foreshadows that he can help. They release a horde of lepers from a hospital nearby which causes the monks to flee and they get the girl back.
The townspeople are scared, many of them want to give Margery back rather than suffer anymore. There is an argument against this. Does Margery go quietly rather than cause more suffering, she is sacrificing herself? Perhaps Edmund leads her to believe that if she will give in he will stop. He spoke to her during the previous night’s actions.
Margery is betrayed and re-arrested. Roger and Jake in desperation turn to ‘good’ magic and summon the Saint of the town. He will not help them directly, but hints that they should speak to the Inquisitor about a woman called Eloise.
Reiterate Reiterate
The mindmap approach has been useful to lay out all the different plot strands. I think it has also shown me that the plot is getting quite complex, and the difficulty I have now is that there are some elements I have decided to change, but I can’t see how they have affected the basics of the story.
Description of Novel:
Roger Draper, a young priest, investigates gruesome murders that lead him into conflict with a necromancer who threatens to destroy him and his loved ones.
Beginning:
Roger stumbles across a demonic ritual that involves the murder of a beggar and, despite the efforts of the authorities to cover it up, he is
When the murders affect the richer townspeople a riot against the abbey ensues and Margery is released.
John of Gaunt arrives and threatens the town with terrible consequences unless Margery is returned.
The townspeople stand firm – there is violence, but Gaunt’s men are expelled.
Roger and Jake save the Inquisitor’s friend from the clutches of the necromancer, thus removing the hold he has over the Inquisitor. The necromancer dies in the battle and his demon is sent back to the Inferno having been defeated by mortal means and not magic.
Snowflake so far
So far so good, I think. I’ve got to stage 3 of the snowflake method without too much drama and found out a lot of solid information about the story and the characters. Stage 3 is to work through important information about each major character: motivation, conflict, resolution, and also a paragraph on the story from the characters perspective, their own personal storyline. I think this is the bit that I have found most useful as it makes you think through the story from the point of view of the character, which adds a lot more depth to the story.