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  1. Did you get some good feedback on your story? I didn’t realize that it was a short story and not an opening chapter to a novel. So yes, it makes more sense in that context. Sorry, I didn’t see your message earlier on Critique Circle. For some reason, it doesn’t send me the notification that I have a message to my gmail. I have to check the site every time.

    I actually think the story could really work well as an opening chapter to a full novel. It had good suspense. Made me want to read Chapter 2.

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