What I’m doing now? Editing Bisclavert

Editing Bisclavert again and again and again it seems!

Received some useful feedback on the story at VWC, which confirmed my suspicions about the first third being a little dull. So I have shortened it drastically. I’m planning to post a revised version on the VWC message board and see what people think before then submitting to A Fly in Amber for their delictation. 

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