Update: 6th December 2008. 672 Words of Easy River revision completed

Just started on the revision for Easy River to Success. I managed 672 words of the scene where Benetus meets Arax. So far I have got Benetus to where he is just about to meet Arax, that is he is about to end up in the quagmire. 

I’m fairly happy, I think, with what I wrote today. I think maybe I need to be more specific or clearer about the previous spirits Benetus has visited on the spirit-river, and what his hopes were for this visit. I could think about another place or manner in which to introduce this element. 
I might do a little bit now on putting together some of the content for my profile website. 

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