Comments on: Chivalry on Critique Circle http://marklord.info/2010/02/17/chivalry-on-critique-circle/ Thu, 26 Jan 2012 14:52:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Steven Till http://marklord.info/2010/02/17/chivalry-on-critique-circle/comment-page-1/#comment-708 Steven Till Fri, 12 Mar 2010 14:42:41 +0000 http://marklord.info/?p=914#comment-708 Did you get some good feedback on your story? I didn't realize that it was a short story and not an opening chapter to a novel. So yes, it makes more sense in that context. Sorry, I didn't see your message earlier on Critique Circle. For some reason, it doesn't send me the notification that I have a message to my gmail. I have to check the site every time. I actually think the story could really work well as an opening chapter to a full novel. It had good suspense. Made me want to read Chapter 2. Did you get some good feedback on your story? I didn’t realize that it was a short story and not an opening chapter to a novel. So yes, it makes more sense in that context. Sorry, I didn’t see your message earlier on Critique Circle. For some reason, it doesn’t send me the notification that I have a message to my gmail. I have to check the site every time.

I actually think the story could really work well as an opening chapter to a full novel. It had good suspense. Made me want to read Chapter 2.

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